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The scar par l'accordéon jaune

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INT. RESTAURANT. NIGHT.

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People talking loudly. ELI (female, 30) calmly eats soup. She is not very hungry. Something is on her mind.

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In front of her sits DAN (male, 32), whose face we don't see. He eats soup too, but he does it very SLOWLY and very LOUDLY.

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This makes Eli uncomfortable.

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She stops eating.

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She searches Dan's gaze, but she can't catch it. He keeps on eating his soup in this painful silence.

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Eli drops her gaze. She cleans her mouth with her NAPKIN then leaves it on the table. She's lost her appetite.

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Dan suddenly stops eating. Eli looks up, and swiftly takes her napkin to him as if to help clean something off him.

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Dan shuns Eli's hand away.

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We see Dan cleaning his mouth. He has a BAD CUT on his upper lip.

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Dan resumes his eating in painstaking silence.

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INT. CAR. NIGHT.

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Dan drives the car. Eli sits in the passenger seat.

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Silence.

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Eli keeps giving quick looks at Dan, but he doesn't flinch.

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She softly puts her hand on Dan's leg.

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Dan is startled. He removes Eli's hand to put it on her own leg, then clinches the stirring wheel.

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Eli looks helplessly out the window.

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Dan glances at her. He holds his gaze on her to take her all in, from her head down.

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His gaze stalls on her thigh.

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He shakes off a feeling, and turns his attention back to the road, holding the stirring wheel tightly.

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INT. FLAT'S BEDROOM. NIGHT.

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Eli is in bed, the covers up to her neck. A light coming from the bathroom illuminates her face. She keeps looking in its direction.

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Dan turns off the light as he leaves the bathroom. Eli follows him with her eyes.

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Dan is in his pyjamas: LONG SLEEVES TOP and LONG BOTTOMS. He gets a couple of blankets from a closet and walks out of the bedroom.

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INT. LIVING ROOM. NIGHT.

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Dan tries to sleep on the sofa, but he's restless.

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Eli calls from the bedroom:

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ELI (O.S.)

(feeble)

Dan?

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Dan opens his eyes but doesn't move.

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He considers his options.

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Beat.

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He gets up reluctantly.

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INT. BEDROOM. CONT.

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Dan stops at the entrance of the bedroom.

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ELI

I need to go to the toilet.

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Dan goes to Eli. He removes the duvet to reveal Eli in underwear and t-shirt. There is a LARGE SCAR on Eli's naked leg going from the knee up to her stomach where it disappears under her t-shirt.

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Dan picks Eli up in his arms and carries her to the bathroom.

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INT. BEDROOM. LATER.

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Dan carries Eli back to the bed.

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As he lays her down, Eli gently clutches his neck, and draws Dan's face to hers.

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She kisses his lips.

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Dan winces at the pain.

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Beat.

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Eli kisses him again, more tenderly this time. It hurts less.

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Dan kisses her back.

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Dan gets into bed with Eli. She turns off the bedside lamp.

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Eli removes Dan's top and kisses his chest tenderly.

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They have sex, and Eli is now entranced. She kisses Dan avidly, almost viciously.

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She bites him here and there. He flinches as a reflex but keeps going.

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It gets intense. She bites him harder and harder, until:

Dan screams in excruciating pain.

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Dan jumps off the bed. He turns on the bedroom main light.

He stands at a distance from Eli, naked from the waist up. His body is covered in SMALL SCARS.

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He has a BIT OF FLESH missing from under his left armpit. The blood runs down to his PJ bottoms.

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He stares at Eli in disbelief.

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We now see Eli with her mouth covered in blood.

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Pause.

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Eli extends her arm in Dan's direction as if to apologise.

He takes a resolute step back.

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DAN

ENOUGH!

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As Dan speaks, we see he is missing the TIP OF HIS TONGUE.

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BLACK.

théologie et géométrie
© 2021 un peu quatre

art par SamD et kiwi vert

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